A Speed Seduction® Poem

Ross, how do you come up with this awesome stuff. I have your course and I have come a long way but your stuff is just too awesome. It is so vague and ambiguous yet so specific. I hope that one day I can come up with stuff like that. Great stuff.

I really like the image of velvet wings, but why did you decide to use them?

Hi Paul,

This whole poem is a cobweb of ambiguities and metaphors. This is what I’ve noticed:

1. sexual metaphors: archway, thoughts (what kind of thoughts?), special touch, ‘something’ spreading wide, private things, gate, flooding tide, key…slipped inside, locks releasing, floding tide

phonetic ambiguities: your mind (vs. you’re mine), you feel yourself…surrendering, we come together

2. major themes: surrender (to the voice that is leading her through the experience, to the ‘stronger will’), sexual pleasure (and a relationship possibly hidden from others’ knowing: ‘private things’), intimacy and connection built through sexual experience (‘we come together’, ‘future bound’, ‘the start of what we’ll share), experiencing something extraordinary (leave normal things behind)

3. pseudo-orientation (is that time distorsion?): now…future bound, and the final few lines: imagine months to come, looking back now at today the start of …

4. arousal, increasing to the point of orgasm (vagueness: thoughts begin to flow – what thoughts?, archway opens deeper, faster…, a heart is pounding somewhere – whose heart, where?, a little sound escapes your lips – what sound?) – you use vagueness to describe actions and processes, but never name these processes (eg arousal) thereby making commands and suggestions more acceptable

5. archway – both a a metaphor for her pussy and also as a symbol of two things joining (also associated to weddings – bleh), a floodgate about to burst (again as a metaphor), the man holding the key to her lock, releasing the flooding tide (he is key to her sexual fulfillment)

Alex

Velvet wings=Vaginal lips.

Ruby Butterfly=from the chesspiece
Rosebud=Citizen Kane WR hearst orson welles

Great poem ! I’ve been studying and love the material you offer it’s helpful in several areas of my life . I would like to understand better how you would use these skills in a marriage also a collection of poems and stories for lovers would be awesome . Have a wonderful new year and thank you for being so generous with all the content you give away.

Dear Mentor

Here are my answers I hope they suffice I have followed your blog and took your homestudy course in the late 90s and poetry was the only way I was able to eventually use and become successful at SS.

1.What are the sexual metaphors in this poem/phonetic ambiguities?

A. Step more even deeper in, something spreading wide, imagine slipped inside

2.What are the major themes and how might they appeal to women?
A. Escape and surrender, a woman longs to be able to enjoy experiences without the social and other pressures of every day life.

3.Where do I use pseudo-orientation in time?

A. The last stanza “As you imagine months to come, but you pressupose time in the previous stanza ending Yet future bound some how.

4.What are the body sensations in this? How do I describe them?
A. Heart pounding, velvet sensations a presup to carress?

5.What are the major visual images? What meaning might they have as related to connection/coming together of a man and a woman?

A. Embrace, kiss, touch and deeper connecting?

P.S. This is an awesome poem, I haven’t written a seductive poem in years and the ones I wrote are stuck on my crashed PC. 🙁

Thank you for sharing this
Nick

Turn – this is like STOP.. Should be said like a command. Turns the mind into a new direction to start accepting suggestions and imagine.
And see the archway 
That exists inside – Archway of mind.. to enter a deep-level trance where anything can be possible

You’re mind

Now…feel my voice

That leads you through

Leave normal things behind – all escape lead through your voice.. anchors to your voice

You step more

Even deeper in

The higher up you go

You feel yourself

Surrendering – up to here, it’s like deepener.. progressively go more and more into trance

And ..THOUGHTS…begin to flow – day dream thoughts.. like trance

For me…You find your special touch

Something spreading..wide. – legs or lips spreading.. ?

You feel yourself – feel her pussy lips

Expanding – pussy lips spreading

Expectations left OUT side – just surrender.. no social responses, etc.. just tune into experience and enjoy

The archway opens deeper .. her mind and willingness and also vagina opening wider

Deeper, faster, stronger, still – more sexual metaphor

A heart is pounding somewhere – builds excitement

Making way for stronger will – makes her a better person; builds on her character and willingness to grow as a person through allowing herself to experience these kinds of thing with you.

A little sound

Escapes your lips – like Ohhh yes!! (she imagines experiencing pleasure that makes her moan)

You picture private things – like fucking

A longing for

Surrender now

To fly with velvet wings – to surrender into arms of a soft and gentle man

The archway now

Becomes a gate

That holds a flooding tide – orgasm? overwhelming pleasure?

Now see the key

That’s held by me
Imagine slipped inside – you’re cock that brings her to orgasm

Locks releasing – creampie/you orgasm inside her pussy.

Time stands still – because when you have an orgasm time literally does stand still.

We come together now – cum!!

The only moment
Is this one – the climax of enjoyment of life

Yet future bound somehow – pseudo-orient into time for regular fucking and love-making with you.. this guy that makes her feel like no one else can.

As you imagine months to come – more pseudo-orient into time and months of cumming with you and your voice

And turning round from there

And looking back now at today

The start of what we’ll share – idem.

Other ideas on presentation: I don’t know.. maybe somehow incorporate it with a game like the cube. Or if she’s interested in experiencing a trance, you lead her into a light one and see how she likes it and then recite it.

The major themes:
Romance and surrendering; A guy that they feel safe with and can lead them to all sorts of wonderful experiences
Building character and sense of self.. giving permission to feel and experience one’s mind and body.
body sensations (one of the four doorways)

Actually, this poem utilizes all 4-doorways: Visualizations, body sensations, connection and her sense of self/core.

So other main theme is, “The 4-doorways” and the deeper, ‘4th-level’ of her mind past illusion of choice & habit and past social programming.

Ross/Paul,

What are other ways of presenting this powerful language and get her to experience it.. if she doesn’t like poetry?

Great poem.

It’s an amazing description of her vagina that’s wet and dripping and the orgasm.

As you read it to her, would you say, “Month to come” or “Month to cum”?

Thanks Ross.

Ross or Paul This is always a good thing Poetry It reminds me of your Einstein vs. Newton 2000 tapes. Puting your voice in someone’s mind even in business communications is clever.

Hi Ross,
1 Archway widening, becomes a gate. Key held by me, slipped inside.
2 Leaving behind doors and moving through archways, surrendering.
3 Time stands still, only a momument, yet future bound somehow.
4 Archway opens deeper, flooding tide, key held by me.
5 Locks releasing.
P.S Ross I hope these are correct, if not i blame the Egg Nog!

Excellent!!! Would like more poems (Yes I have love drops and Tidal Waves below me, they can be good but tend to be too graphic, I like your work much better) I heard one of your poems but can’t find it again that I really liked it started out “I will open you like a flower, peddle by peddle, taking all the time in the world. I will build you up like a slow fire, stick by stick and watch the glow of your sunrise…”

I’ve been a long time customer of yours, attended some of your early seminars, but I only seem to get your e-mail that are teasers to make us your customer rather than things that tend to help us improve our skills.

Anyway for this poem, the archway which tends to be seen as strong and majestic, is also the soft entrance to a special, soft part of the woman and a special gateway, it has a way of the woman feeling strong, but not the strength to keep out, but strength is an openness to allow entrance, giving a message that there is a true strength in being open to our friendship and relationship rather than the strength of a fortress to keep you out unless you are one of those who are able to overcome the obstacles and defenses.

Now feel my voice… you can’t reach out and touch a voice so you need to use another sense of feel… your feelings. And they must be good feelings because they lead you through… there is a passage that you are together entering, the arch is no longer that soft part of her, but it is a passage way that you are both passing through, it is the archway that you enter after you’ve passed the gates of Disneyland, you go through that long archway were you leave the routine behind and enter a land of adventure and fantasy, again telling her that her attitude towards me is not to be the “keep him out unless he can break my defenses” but here we are already on a date and she is a little girl with her friends getting ready to enjoy Disneyland. The arch is again to welcome rather than exclude.

She feels herself surrendering to me. She is no longer the fort who had to shut out unless I can be clever enough, rich enough or what ever enough to break down her defenses and crack the wall and pour over the crack in her wall to make her submit as the other guys she’s allowed herself to be with has done which leaves her so empty, but she has chosen to put up the white flag, and lower the drawbridge to welcome me inside. We are going to work out a truce that is to our mutual advantage. I don’t need to break her defenses, she is welcoming me.

I’m not a rude conquer, but a kind person who came to her and who she does not need to be defensive towards but someone to welcome inside as we both form a togetherness that expands her experiences of the world to find that guys don’t fit in the two groups she’s use to; the AFC’s who she shuts out and the players who make her submit for a moment pleasure followed by pain, but here is a partner for her to enjoy this new part of the world, a playmate for her to enjoy this world on the other side of the arch, and here the arch is the gateway to the third level of the mind where she keeps those special things. And the usual expectations, that unless you conquer the second part of her mind (what would my friends and family think, what does Hollywood and Cosmo say about that type of guy I should allow in my bed) or be shut out, those old expectations are to be left outside. Don’t even consider placing me in the nice guy category or AFC category, nor should you place me with those other guys who you did submit to who left you empty. I don’t fit those categories I’m your friend joining you to our special adventure through the archway!

It’s late and I need to sleep, but of course the way how this adventure grows as the archway leads in deeper and the flood of feelings and the moment is now, yet future and you are already in the future looking back on now.

Excellent!!! Would like more poems (Yes I have love drops and Tidal Waves below me, they can be good but tend to be too graphic, I like your work much better) I heard one of your poems but can’t find it again that I really liked it started out “I will open you like a flower, peddle by peddle, taking all the time in the world. I will build you up like a slow fire, stick by stick and watch the glow of your sunrise…”

I’ve been a long time customer of yours, attended some of your early seminars, but I only seem to get your e-mail that are teasers to make us your customer rather than things that tend to help us improve our skills.

Anyway for this poem, the archway which tends to be seen as strong and majestic, is also the soft entrance to a special, soft part of the woman and a special gateway, it has a way of the woman feeling strong, but not the strength to keep out, but strength is an openness to allow entrance, giving a message that there is a true strength in being open to our friendship and relationship rather than the strength of a fortress to keep you out unless you are one of those who are able to overcome the obstacles and defenses.

Now feel my voice… you can’t reach out and touch a voice so you need to use another sense of feel… your feelings. And they must be good feelings because they lead you through… there is a passage that you are together entering, the arch is no longer that soft part of her, but it is a passage way that you are both passing through, it is the archway that you enter after you’ve passed the gates of Disneyland, you go through that long archway were you leave the routine behind and enter a land of adventure and fantasy, again telling her that her attitude towards me is not to be the “keep him out unless he can break my defenses” but here we are already on a date and she is a little girl with her friends getting ready to enjoy Disneyland. The arch is again to welcome rather than exclude.

She feels herself surrendering to me. She is no longer the fort who had to shut out unless I can be clever enough, rich enough or what ever enough to break down her defenses and crack the wall and pour over the crack in her wall to make her submit as the other guys she’s allowed herself to be with has done which leaves her so empty, but she has chosen to put up the white flag, and lower the drawbridge to welcome me inside. We are going to work out a truce that is to our mutual advantage. I don’t need to break her defenses, she is welcoming me.

I’m not a rude conquer, but a kind person who came to her and who she does not need to be defensive towards but someone to welcome inside as we both form a togetherness that expands her experiences of the world to find that guys don’t fit in the two groups she’s use to; the AFC’s who she shuts out and the players who make her submit for a moment pleasure followed by pain, but here is a partner for her to enjoy this new part of the world, a playmate for her to enjoy this world on the other side of the arch, and here the arch is the gateway to the third level of the mind where she keeps those special things. And the usual expectations, that unless you conquer the second part of her mind (what would my friends and family think, what does Hollywood and Cosmo say about that type of guy I should allow in my bed) or be shut out, those old expectations are to be left outside. Don’t even consider placing me in the nice guy category or AFC category, nor should you place me with those other guys who you did submit to who left you empty. I don’t fit those categories I’m your friend joining you to our special adventure through the archway!

It’s late and I need to sleep, but of course the way how this adventure grows as the archway leads in deeper and the flood of feelings and the moment is now, yet future and you are already in the future looking back on now.

Sexual Metaphores:
– Archway inside
– “THOUGHTS” begin to flow
– find your special touch
– spreading wide
– feel yourself, expanding
– making way for stronger will
– velvet wings
– archway is repeated with variations throughout
– gate, key, slipped inside
– locks releasing

Major Themes:
Special Places, Opening, Surrender, Flowing Higher,
Special Touch, Excitement and Anticipation, Longing for Surrender, Fulfilemnt of Desire.

Pseudo-orientation it Time:
– First block: leave normal things behind.
– Sencond to last: time stands still.
– All of last block.

Body Sensations:
– feel my voice
– stepping higher is vague, but it gives even me a body sensation like flying in a dream.
– find your special touch
– something spreading wide
– feel yourself expanding
– heart pounding
– sound escapes lips

Visual Images:
_ archway: entering into something new togeter.
– stepping higher: a shared journey
– Private things: sex.
– fly with velvet wings. orgasm.
– Gate: boundries, barriers, control.
– Key: key is a metaphore for itself, but the complement to the gate, the control to let go of control, the Right man to unlock her potential, voluntarily allowing entry or entry according to her unique blueprint.
– Locks releasing: freedom from her own boundries, freedom from social boundries, freedom from those damned panties!
– looking back now at today: the “money shot”

The more i read this, the better it is. It is so subtle. So gentle, yet speaks to a deeper longing.

Like the notion of ones ‘true love’, not as a place in some infinite space but right here in front of you.

All of that, laced with generous sexual metaphor that naturally underpins the process anyways .

It feels kinda incomplete. I am not perfectly sure but it feels like its missing a ‘wake up to this right here and now, don’t let the opportunity pass you by’ type feel at the end. Either way, im going to share this one with my girl 😀 its brilliant and all i see is the color of mysterious powerful black with a drop of red for sexuality when i imagine how you made it.

Cheers! oh, and I answered a few of your questions below.

1)archway = vagina/ door to place of fantasy
your mind = you’re mine
even deeper in = (enhances archway-vagina metaphor)
Something spreading..wide. = her tantalizing tulip
velvet wings = labia.
stanzas 4,5&7 = foreplay to sex and then orgasm (fly with velvet wings)
The archway now Becomes a gate = relationship forming.
Gate = a glory hole for you and you alone
Flooding tide = sexual desire/ her moist goodness
The key = goldmembers penis
Locks releasing = Bodily surrender at orgasm.

2) The theme of surrender is pretty major. Women want a man that they can surrender NOT submit to. There is a huge difference there. Surrender is willing and wanton whereas submission is ‘forced’. In relationships women are constantly negotiating between fantasy and reality, surrender implies freedom and willing immersion that bypasses the normal frustrations women have with guys. I see this as the most important right now.

The theme of sex is pretty obvious but its context is important, it is in the context of fantasy and pure desire for the other person. Anything that taps into that creative pleasure place takes immediate importance.

The theme of the inner mind and fantasy. Women are by society expected to be emotional masters. So the inner mind is important as it plays a huge part in emotional experiences. Not only that, the intuitive nature of the inner mind is appealing as a mystery of her self that once understood seems to bring all forms of understandings and intuitions into clear focus. I may be missing something here but i do “feel” that this is an important theme.

Theme of forming relationships. This is a larger overall theme implied by archway into gate. By golly if book sales statistics have taught me anything its that women are interested in relationships so ill be damned if something talking about relationships doesn’t pique their attention.

3) you use it in the last stanza. present future -> future present.

Awesome patterns, very covert, makes us guys look innocent, while makes her think she is the sexual one.

I need help in coming up with such patterns.

1.sexual metaphors…there are so many…feel yourself,surrender,begin to flow,special touch,spreading wider,deeper,faster,stronger…2.archways in your mind(fantasy),feel my voice(masculine sexual),feel yourself(touching her pussy),surrender(being led),begin to flow(pussy getting wet),special touch(fingering her pussy)spreading wide(her legs),deeper,faster,stronger still(getting fucked),heart pounding(cumming),sound escapes her lips(moaning)flood tide&locks release(climaxing)…3.the last 2 paragraphs…4.the whole poem is a body sensation…feel my voice that leads you,feel yourself surrender,begin to flow,special touch,spreading wide,expanding, archways open,heart pounding…5.archway opens,deeper,deeper,faster, stronger still,you picture private things,the archway now becomes a gate that holds a flooding tide now see the key that’s held by me imagine slipped inside…its a stoke of genious

Good stuff Paul! I took some time to parse this which was fun even though a bit analytic. But I also recognize what you describe as letting your unconscious mind flow. It´s fun when you come up with things even though I am nowhere near the quality and consistency you show. It´s more like sometimes it happens.

Anyway, here are my answers to the questions:
1 The sexual metaphors involved
The gateway is at first mainly a metaphor of stepping into trance but it also comes up as a metaphor for the vagina. That becomes more obvious later on when ”the archway opens deeper”. Basically the first paragraph and a half is more or less a trance induction.
The key held by you that opens the gate… The penis of course, slipping in and at the same time releasing a flood of stemmed desire.
”Something spreading wide.” Legs? Lips? What lips?
”Pounding” Could that be something else than the heart?
And of course the velvet wings mentioned.

Ambiguities
Your mind/you´re mine. Now…
”Thoughts begin to flow” Those would definately be adult thoughts but it is vague opening up for her to make her own imaginings.
Begin to flow for me/ For me you find a special touch. The punctuation is ambiguous here. Both meanings apply to the unconscious.
”You feel yourself” Could mean touching private parts. Notice the pause hinted by putting the word expanding on the next line.

2 Themes
Major themes are surrender and in a way connection.
Surrender as in ”my voice that leads you through” and ”Making way for a stronger will”.
And how does that appeal to women? Well letting go to someone who is safe and strong, has a will and who is a man and not having to be in control and be a bitch all the time is not so bad is it? BTW what are your thoughts on Madonna´s song ”Justify my love”?

3 Pseudo-orientation
The pseudo-orientation in time is at the end when you make her look at this from the future as being the start of something you will share. Connection, relationship or just some good sex? She´ll fill in te blanks with whatever pleases her the most.

4 Body sensations:
”You find your special touch” What touch? Just fill the blanks.
”You feel yourself expanding.” The chest expanding as you take a deep breath before you let a sigh out? Or nipples and labia expanding?
”A heart is pounding somewhere.”

5 Visual images
The major images would be the archway, the gate that holds the flooding tide and the key. There´s also a command to ”picture private things” that is sure to lead up to some imagery.

6 Embedded commands
”You feel yourself surrendering”
”You find your special touch.”
”You feel yourself”
”You picture private things”
”Surrender now”
”See the key… imagine slipped inside.”
”Come together now”
”You imagine months to come” And the rest of the paragraph follows, essentially a command to imagine everything hinted at in that paragraph.

7 Suggestions
”Thoughts begin to flow”
”Expectations left outside”
”Making way for stronger will”

Happy sarging new year!

Great poem Paul! I know you discourage guys from wasting time with on-line dating, but poetic language works well on idealistic women. I usually try it after I establish rapport when I find one. About a year and half ago I met a 27 year who really got aroused and was intrigued by our conversations. Of course, when I met her in person I screwed up and didint have the skills to keep our conversation going in the right direction. It’s really fun when you find one of those honeys that melt for the written word…

IPSE DIXIT
“I’d better do nightgame”

sorry Ross 🙂

Poems are powerful especially when made with proper language as our mentor has taught for decades.

For me when I have used the poems I either outright ask if they want to listen to a poem or I build a conversation based on a similar theme to the poem and slowly insert poetry as a part of the conversation to build their interest in poems, then I say “well I have a poem that talks about similar things, if you listen to it you will understand.

They usually agree and sit quiet while you lay it on them with all the wonderful embedded commands and the like. Often they will talk about it with you and then you can feed back to them parts of the poem or link commands to what they “mysteriously are feeling at the moment”.

I have done this over the phone, in person and even emails. They work but like all things each woman responds differently and to some parts of your poem more than others.

I enjoy poetry period but this to me Speed Seduction applied in poetry is the language of the soul. I’ve never had a negative response to my poems with women ever, it it wasn’t working I’d move to another thing.

Nick

my assignment
1.What are the sexual metaphors in this poem/
Even deeper in,You feel yourself Surrendering,Something spreading..wide.You feel yourself Expanding,the archway opens deeper Deeper, faster, stronger,You picture private things,A longing for Surrender now,

this poem works! I gave it to a friend to read and she got HOT!

Can someone please post the poem again, I really need it for valentines day. I would appreciate it! 🙂

Friends it looks like a great SS poem. I haven’t tried it yet. Actually today i was going to try it out with a female friend but i’d accidently lost it. If someone among you has it then please mail me at lexflynn@rediffmail.com.